Gold Pocket Watch Fob
Should be a comma here?
Hey, write a novel and simply can not for the life of me thinks that if a comma is here. Here is the paragraph: the moon through the window cracked, lit his office. There are a stack of blank paper, a sharpened pencil and a pocket watch. He took the pocket watch for the tenth time in what seemed like an hour, and examined the face, before the opening. The fab gold was slightly EL engraved in a beautiful script. This was to be his inspiration. This beautiful watch he found on the street, was intended to lead to an award-winning novel. He desperate … SO in the first sentence, is it supposed to be a comma after window or not? Thank you!
"Nothing but the moon in the window Cracked lit office. "Nope, it should not be a comma." This shows great, it was in the street, was intended to lead to an award-winning novel. "This should not be a comma is, or there should be two commas – like this:" This shows superb, it was found in the street, was to lead an award-winning novel. "This is a webpage Nice use commas: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/607/02/ The novel sounds intersting btw!
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