Pocket Watch Guide Book
This story is appealing?
A young man named Barrow is a life of theft and pickpocketing. It is guarded if and when his friend is murdered, it must travel to distant lands, parallel worlds and even hell itself in order to discover why his life turned on its head and this he must do to stop the demon gods. For Barrow soon finds it is not just an ordinary pick pocket, it is an angel and half the lot the three worlds, is in its own hands … Would you be interested in reading a book, if it was a synopsis or a short fast … guide, perhaps what the story is about. It does seem a bit generic, I grant you. However, there are deeper things that I touch. The nature of human existence, the idea of God amomg other things. This is not just heroes. So I no plans yet. No, I'm still planning … I want to get it published so I will not be circulating draft unfortunatley.
I would not read your book. Barrow is a complete Mary Sue. A half-angel? The fate of three worlds? As my girlfriends say "PUH-Leeze. Why Barrow HAVE to travel to distant lands or elsewhere? And where did the demon gods come in? Reflections on nature? Yishai, sounds like a reason to stop in the middle of a story and info-dump. Maybe you have something here, but tread lightly with Barrow. A bad character can ruin an entire book.
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