Pocket Watch Stamp

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Please note the following test (assuming that the full score is 100 points). Strong critism is welcome. You thank you very much in advance. Dear friends, we college students may be a way to get our pocket money from our parents, but we have several ways to use it properly Firstly, it is necessary to try to save some our pocket money in a bank, which helps us to develop a habit of savings. We'll find a great draw for the Bank, if we we really need money. More importantly, we can choose to spend pocket money on books that are both interesting and useful. The more books we read, the more we know the world. Moreover, by spending pocket money listening to a concert, watch a game football or collecting stamps, we can develop our interest in music, sport or stamp collecting. I hope we can all make a better use of our money. Thank you.

It is really short … Can you give us the invitation? RANKING (each worth 20 points) Content: 15 Master of the sentence: 13 Conventions: 17 Word Choice: 14 votes: 14 TOTAL: 73/100 Content CRITICAL: Your ideas are okay, but you need to develop more. One sentence per idea is not enough. You should be writing 5 paragraph essays, each about 6 sentences long (this depends the command prompt). In addition, the location of your ideas in order of importance. Learning about the world and how to manage money may be more important that philately. Your introduction is missing, as if you skipped over much so that you can start writing. Sentence Mastery: You are using "we" a lot, especially to begin your sentences. Not very well. Do not use if transitions, if it is a good thing. You should not use "I" it seems too informal, and this sounds like a speech of some sort. the use of "may" in each sentence, replace "may" or "should". Conventions Places: Your grammar is average, but you got extra points for using punctuation pigeon. Do not forget the period the first sentence. In addition, the "friends" should be capitalized. Word Choice: Very average, use more adjectives to spice up your writing. Voice: Your voice is apparent, but the trial should really be longer. Again, knowing the prompt help. GENERAL: Refine your essay, make a little longer and more descriptive. Also make it more formal. Good luck!

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