Pocket Watch Weight
Run on sentences !!!!!?
What could I replace the word "and" in these sentences to avoid the run on sentences .. 1. If you think your hungry enough to eat a horse and do not want to gain weight, a Chinese restaurant would be best. 2. In the bus, we started talking and he asked about my daily routine that I did tonight and what I wanted to do during the weekends. 3. The waste problem has been the dawn of time, and only now it has become much worse. 4.One myth is that women arent committed to their work and they will leave when they marry and children. 5. If you want to double your money in the race, fold in half and put in your pocket and look.
I would like to issue a replacement AND with BUT. Number two, I would replace the first and the duration and do the rest, a new sentence by adding a comma after "routine". for 3 and 4 it is sufficient to replace the DNA with a 5 number i would replace the first with a comma. hope these suggestions help
Pocket Digital LCD 300 Gram Weight Scale
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